NEW CHARA SKETCH (tell me what you think of it)

Just a quick sketch of a story I'm thinking about, it's as advanced as the drawing is right now so I don't have a lot XD
For the moment I can only share the fact that the story take place in a futuristic universe and is about that guy (Deys) who erase his memory because something happened to him that he couldn't live with. And Cath is here to avoid him to remember but I still don't know who she is and what happened to him
But I think I might work more on it, I really love thoses characters :3
And Idk if I'll finish this sketch, maybe XD
Anyway tell me what you think about it ^^

I used the pose from Couples - poses chart  by , thanks to her for sharing those amazing models :3